Sunday, 17 June 2012
The house on the hill
I had read the essay written by Chuan Xin Vee, 17 from SMK Seafield, Selangor and it really a splendid essay. This essay tells about a wonderful memories of a boy with a girl who lives in a house on the hill. He found the girl touching the flower tenderly and smiling to herself while he was cycling his bicycle. After that, he chat a little with the girl and found out that the girl have interest in imaginary creatures such as fairies. As the result of her not logical interest, she always been teased by other children but not the boy. They both became a good friend and always share their time together. One day, the girl`s house was half-eaten by the fire and the girl need to move. However, this incident did not break their friendship and they still connected to each other through letters.When the boy had grown up, he watched the site of the house and watching his vivid childhood memories. The house is no longer surrounded by beautiful flowers and the weeds take over the place. Then, he walked away from the remorseful, forlorn-looking house on the hill. The End. The story is really touching and it is totally a fine essay. It is the most interesting essay I have ever read.